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stareja
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 2:40 pm    Post subject: Critique #1 Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 1:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Both are pretty good, but I dunno. They seem to be missing something. I can't quite put my finger on it. Not bad though.
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 1:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
frankowen2 wrote:
Both are pretty good, but I dunno. They seem to be missing something. I can't quite put my finger on it. Not bad though.


I took a bit of a harder look at them.

In the first one, the vine makes me feel like it's leading to something, but there's nothing there. Maybe I should have done more of a macro shot. Possibly have it lead into something, but, with the sun around, I would have had a lot of problems with exposure (still learning).

I think the second one is fine, but would probably have been better if I had a person walking towards or away. You know, more of a focus point. I guess that's what's "wrong" with both, other than being slightly over-exposed, anyway.

I still like 'em though Smile
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